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Thursday 4 August 2016

Advertising DLO



We have been focusing on advertising. We had to make this fake DLO advertisement on a hoverbike. My hoverbike is gas powered with a special seat, protective shield at the front and wings. It was an awesome activity and I even made the hoverbike myself!

1 comments:

Robyn Anderson said...

Well done boys! I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.

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