6 Sentence Quick Writes

Today I have written these quick write story's about the Loch Ness monster and a creepy creature. The reason we wrote these story's was to practice writing narratives for next terms writing assessments.

Monday quick writes.

                             My super heroes.

Description  My super heroes are my grand parents because they have looked after me for most of my life. When My parents have had to both do some thing and they would have not come back till the next morning my grand parents will let my brother and I stay there.

My grand parents have walked us to school nearly every morning and my grandma makes the nicest milk shakes.
They have helped by making my brother and I dinner and breakfast when we had to stay the nights at their house.
My grandma is 65 and she used to work at this school but she retired and my granddad is 72 and even though they are are not my parents  I still love them and they are like parents to me.

Narrative
"Hey lets go play on the park" "OK" said mike
"what are you kids doing here" "what" I said what are you doing here" "come lets go"
so the kids left the park when suddenly they heard foot steps and they were the super grandparents so they told the super grandparents what had happened and they went to the park.

 When they got there they saw the terrorists and went to catch them when they froze the grandpa so the grandma got out her shock gun and shocked one of the men.

 But they were in for a surprise when the leader of gang came so the grandma got out her nun chucks and whacked the leader.

But he did not do any thing he just stood  still luckily the grandpa had a lighter so when he go frozen he dropped the lighter and it court fire to the plan that was going to end the world.
So that melted the ice and he got out, they both got out there ninja swords and they captured the terrorists and that is why grandparents are so special.   

LL Monday quick writes.

If I was an animal I would be an anaconda so I can climb up high trees and high places. 

I would be able to sneak past things and I can keep my self safe from things that could hurt me. 

  I would be able to swallow something whole and I would be lucky because I would be strong and fast. I would be one of the scariest things in the jungle and my venom will be very poisons to others  if I bit them.

Monday quick writes.

My most favorite place I have ever been to is candy land. It is in Hamilton  if you do not know what candy land is it is a shop full of candy like bubble gum gobstoppers 
hard candy soft candy chewy candy and much more.

When I first went to candy land there was candy every ware. 
When my dad said we were going I thought it would be like 
charlie and the chocolate factory but it was not.

My favorite candy there is the giant lollipops they had black licorice and red licorice my favorite is red licorice.

I hope one day I will get to go there again some time and you might go to.
I have high lighted 3 simple sentences and 3 conjunctions.   

Monday quick writes.

                         My New Kind Of Sandwich.                            

In my new kind of sandwich I am going to first off have a freshly cooked bun.Then I will spread butter on the bun then I will get some mayonnaise and put that in the bun then I will get some freshly cooked chicken and some freshly picked tomatoes and cucumbers.

I will then get some grated carrots and some lettuce. and I would have ham and BBQ sauce. 

 That is what my new kind of sandwich is like and I hope I will get to try my new kind of sandwich one day.